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When I needed you
where were you?
When I was crying
Why were you gone?
When i said I wanted to die
Why did you encourage me?

When I told you you were my love
Why did you laugh at me?
I only wanted to be honest
and you hurt me far worse
©2004-2009 ~memyslave
:iconmemyslave:

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I just sat down and decided to write

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:iconphoeona-fox:
Wow, i can really relate to this. I really like it :+fav: ^^ well done ^^

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Coin operated girl, with a pretty coin operated voice..saying that I love you, that I'm thinking of you...straight and to the point...
:icontransylvanian13:
I WAS RIGHT HERE!!!...jk...its beautiful...and i have a feeling we will be discussing it later...:smooch:
:iconmemyslave:
thanks.

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Your kind is a disgrace as I spit in your face and I don't want to hear anymore
:iconmemyslave:
thank you :hug: for the fav

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Your kind is a disgrace as I spit in your face and I don't want to hear anymore
:iconnondescrypt:
my heart cringed in pain reading this
it's clear and straight forward
but you can really feel hurt reading it..
I especially love the line..
"when I wanted to die..
why did you encourage me?"

The ending couple of lines finished it well
:iconmemyslave:
thank you

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Your kind is a disgrace as I spit in your face and I don't want to hear anymore

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July 9, 2004
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