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Let me go
I want to fall
  I need to see
   whats down there
    squirming in the grime and mud
      no I found my life again
©2004-2009 ~memyslave
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I wish I could.......

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:icondragonsummoner3000:
hmm...interesting...

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i'm tasu the knight of darkness.
:iconmemyslave:
thank you

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"I stand firm in my solidarity this path i walk, I walk with my own resolve."-When darkness falls-Killswitch Engage.


"Peace in life is ultimately death"-wishes to remain anonymous.
:iconsailor-rocket:
oooo squirming.... good verb!!!
i like how it's stacked ^_^ really cool!

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I love you.
:iconmemyslave:
Yes I am rather fond of it myself I decided to get creative with it.

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"I stand firm in my solidarity this path i walk, I walk with my own resolve."-When darkness falls-Killswitch Engage.


"Peace in life is ultimately death"-wishes to remain anonymous.
:icontaintedviolet:
...This is beautiful...I like using indentations also, they can add another layer of meaning to a piece, and they certainly do here...This is very emotive and very honest...:heart:

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My group: ~Just-An-Exit

My dA mum's group: ~bats

@>--Little Girl Lost--<@
:iconmemyslave:
i think they add something dunno what. thanks

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"I stand firm in my solidarity this path i walk, I walk with my own resolve."-When darkness falls-Killswitch Engage.


"Peace in life is ultimately death"-wishes to remain anonymous.

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